Elstan Shadow(DONE)

[† Elstan Shadow †]

Name: Elstan Hope Shadow

Age: 19

Race: Human

Class: Black Mage

Guardian Force: Mist Dragon

Weapon: Scythe

Abilities:

• Master Caster: Elstan has been training with magic since she was a little girl. She is a fantastic mage knowing her stuff from her spell books which she knows each spell off by heart.
  
• Wisdom: Elstan is known well for her wisdom. She is smart as she keeps to her books and is will to pass her knowledge onto others if she likes you.
  
• Teacher: Elstan is a teacher at heart only teaching those she thinks can cope being a black mage.
  
• Thinker: Elstan thinks before she acts. Unlike some she uses her brain. She can read a person like a book and decides whether she likes them or not.
  
• Interrogation: When being in a room with Elstan she'll do anything to get information out of you. Whether that be through pain or torture.
  
• Good hand eye coordination: Elstan is as agile as a cat. She Never misses anything. She can sense things and catch them before they even hit her.
  
• Leader: In a group Elstan is the one you should listen to. She is a fantastic leader and a good listener which a good boss needs to be. She has decent tactics for everyone to use when they work for her.
  
• Good Caster: Elstan's spells are powerful and unmissable. Sometimes she can miss buts it rare.
  
• Wand Maker: She makes wands for those just starting out using magical materials she finds in wood lands.

Limit Breaks Heartless Angel: When used it brings the enemy's HP down to 90. It also takes 90 of the enemy's MP power. For this FF it brings your Brave down to 90. It is has as appearance of nine wings. A mixture of white and black. This is only used when Elstan is at full strength. This is Elstan's only limit break as its the only one she can cope with.
Appearance:

Personality: Elstan is a do it yourself girl. She doenst have a good side at all. She is pure darkness. She hates anything that is fighting to keep the Planet from being consumed. She will kill anything that gets in her way of her goal. To some she has no heart or no soul. Like they have been taken by Anima himself. She never harms anyone who is helping her such as the Remnants, Sephiroth, Angeal and Genesis. She will put all that she has into any mission given to her and will execute it with near perfection unless shes in a foul mood then she'll leave a message in blood on the walls.

Biography: Thanks to a scientific mishap, a portal opened from Elstan's world to Balamb. She soon didn't like this as the portal closed behind her. She couldn't get home. She has spent the last three years doing research on how this could have happened. She managed to buy a small flat in the most remote place. She has always been locked up in her home doing nother but experiments. Truly, she is missing her family but she is now a hired gun.

Elstan has taken to life in this world very slowly. She kills for money using her combative skills. From this she has gained an unwanted rep. Azriel...The Angel of Death. She now keeps to her work only accepting missions from higher people in the cash chain. All Elstan wants is to go home and be rid of this place once and for all...Even if it means killing those from the Balamb Gardens.
RP Sample: Elstan sighed as she came out of her home. Today was it. She maybe hired from time to time due to her skills as a SOLDIER 1st Class. She looked into the sky. Birds flew over head. She shook her head. The earrings she wore jingled as her head shook. She tucked her long, silver hair behind her ear and walked out onto the busy streets.

She just hoped she wouldn’t bump into that jerk Leonheart along her way...She had a job to do a job she wouldn’t let someone like him spoil. She climbed on top of a building to get a bird’s eye view. The streets were heaving with people. Below her they looked nothing more like ants. Ants that needed to be crushed as the time of JENOVA was nigh. She smiled to herself when she thought about Sephiroth and JENOVA. Her family. A family she would protect with her life. Nevertheless she knew they could take care of themselves, with or without her help. She released her wing. Feathers of an ebony colour went everywhere as she released the feathered appendage. She flew off into the sky to track down her prey.

She found the woman by a fountain in a park. Elstan flew down behind a tree and let her wing sink back into her shoulder. “Good morning!” Elstan tried to say as cheerfully as she could. Being happy disgusted Elstan. She was a more doom and gloom type of person. The woman smiled. Then Elstan turned serious. “Tell me where I can find Siefer.” She hissed. The woman looked scared now and tried to run, but Elstan was too quick. “He’s at the Gardens” The woman said. Elstan smiled evilly. To make sure the woman didn’t run off to warn Siefer she released her hidden blade and pierced the woman’s heart. She didn’t leave her mark as this woman was no one important though she did leave a feather on the body and slunk back into the shadows.

Word Count; 334

[Trever Valens]

Better
But still no

Make a description for your abilities, One winged angel is not a race, You cannot have bahamut as a summon, JENOVA and SOLDIER does not exist in this world nor does any other character from VII exist here, what does your limit break DO? You need to explain it more, and really. I dont care about your word count. Thanks anyway

[† Elstan Shadow †]

DONE!!! ! By the way Im gonna get my friend to join up maybe as Yazoo!!!

[Trever Valens]

get rid of Healer and Weapon Expert and you might just be good to go

[Trever Valens]

and idk, the limit break could use a makeover. No one can bring a player down to 1 HP, take away theyre MP, and even if we worked like that we wouldnt let you bring braver down to nothing either. (Well that one is debatable, but we dont work on the Dissidia system.)

[† Elstan Shadow †]

Doneage little puppy doggy!!! *pets the little puppy*

[Trever Valens]

Dont touch me

And I'm still finding way too many issues with this app.

[Trever Valens]

There's still an issue with the skills.
You cant know every spell. so get rid of a few of the bs abilities that dont even fit a black mage and get some spells.
You should refer to Balto's App. He may be a red mage, but at least he got the whole spells thing right.
(Not to mention his character looks like a badass, just like me.)

[Desiree Hale]

lol